Monday, February 9, 2009

Again, My Love

Rating: 5.0
You gave your love
Nonchalantly, obliviously
Like a day passing its memory
To tomorrow.

I woke up and
Felt you beside me
Snuggled for warmth

Your limpid eyes
Looked hopingly
For yesterday’s reprise
Eddie Roa
Fiona Davidson 23 February 2009
Lovely ad sweet write....enjoyed the read thank you....Fi 10+
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Miriam Maia Padua 22 February 2009
very sweet......gentle words playing in my my mind and heart... bring calmness and peace to my heart... soothing......romantic 10+++
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Eddie Roa 09 February 2009
Hi Bonnie, nothing profound about this. It's just a lover wanting to make love again as they did yesterday...'yesterday's reprise'
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Bonnie Collins 09 February 2009
I read this twice, and for some reason, i was missing something, the beginnig was very good, however I could not follow the ending.......Sorry
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 February 2009
A lucid desire to repeat the music of love is inevitable in this poem.
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Joseph Poewhit 09 February 2009
Poem sort of possesses a special spice
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Sandra Fowler 09 February 2009
Something very poignant about the mood of this one.10 for you. Kind regards, Sandra
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Naidz Ladia 09 February 2009
again, , , we cant deny, love is in the heart of a true lover....a very touching lines composed of gentle wrds to make a complete romantic poem, , , cheers, lav ya kababayan..thanks for inviting.... naizz
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Miriam Maia Padua 09 February 2009
so sweet and romantic.... lovely written...short but expressed the greatness of your love.. i love the words flowing in this piece.... 10++++
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