Aged.and.Unwelcome
when.none.is.watching
tell.him.he.is.unwanted
when.others.arrive,
comfort.the.sick.man, softly
pamper, with.false.affection
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I am also an old man and I can understand feelings of another old man. A touching poem.
A wonderful piece of work! My great pleasure reading it time and again! To MyPoemList
(cont.) ** Definition of club together British : to combine the money of the individuals in a group (in order to pay for something) bri ;) p.s. as has happened to me before, after sending my comments as a message, i tried again to send as comments and no name was asked for. i had NO PROBLEM! ....yet.
warm regards.I don't notice 'club together' - anywhere. can you point out?
i just read your responses to my earlier comments, which i would not have seen if i hadn't forgotten i'd already read this 'title'. thanks. and, YES, a software problem on PH, ....unless individual humans are editing each poem with pencil and some of them are being nasty! ha ha. i've learned to put up with the deleting and 'clubbing' **. i would perhaps use 'clumping'. (cont.)
Thank you for bringing this sorry plight to our attention.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
morally destroyed! (in the Poet's Notes) yikes! i think i'd feel more justified in killing an elderly/'helpless' person, sooner than i'd destroy them morally. ON SECOND THOUGHT, i think you may have mixed up morals with morale *** (continued) ...