Air Of Sadness Poem by Antonio Liao

Air Of Sadness

Rating: 5.0


the kneel
of
mercy blown in the thundering
angry heart and broke
the bladed
soul of forgiveness, recount the
blinded tears of
darkness
as the eye capture the moving spirit
of freedom, closing
as it
crack the stone of pedestal’s honesty,
behold the
courage of courtship, and settle the nest
of righteousness
of humility; dies the perfume
of
humanity and birth
the
arrogant of the darkest light, the beginning
is dawning,
let it
fly and conquer the highest sky
without dying the sadden joy of every soul,
depart forever and gone no more
oh! beautiful soul......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yelena M. 04 July 2009

A beautiful poetic description of the soul purification in these lines...Thanks for sharing! A.

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Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

Deep seeded melancholy illuminates from the poem with a unique theme that has been written very nicely grabs the readers attention. The ending has been made simplified with a message of adaptation that every pure and beautiful soul can achieve with comfort.........

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 June 2009

different feelings being expressed very soulful... touching every soul... 10++ lovelots, maia

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Catrina Heart 23 June 2009

Different in presentation and soulful mood you have penned...marvelous one..10+++

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