Alienage Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
Alienage
Before you cogitate about forsake me,
May I step away from your nest to fly:
To fly alone in a wide and peaceful sky
As I'm not let anyone to get the mastery
Over my unwritten life with their maskery.
Though I'll be there on the next bough;
Away from your arrows and bow;
Holding my dreams hiding inside me,
Until my life-tree sheds all its foliage
Or I lose this lonely life of alienage.
I agree with Valsa George. Anyway it's a beautiful write. God bless you with loving and caring friend and family
I agree with Valsa George. Anyway it's a beautiful write. God bless you with caring and loving friends and family
A beautiful poignant poem with lovely imagery, brilliant write! !
Lovely imagery and brilliant piece of writing...i really liked it...
Dear Vipins, Thank you very much for the read and review. well, i would love to engage myself still close with my sense towards some of your verses. kindly send me a list of the most haunting ones so that i might well be able to concentrate reading. Your support would be of great relevance. Keep penning, You are a Bard, blessed be your voyage to the virgin wilderness of imaginations and passions.
It was remarked for Mir Taqi Mir's felicity of expression that his reader might think that he can write with the same ease with which Mir writes, but when he tries, gets failed...the ease with which you have composed this beautiful poem reminded me of that felicity...it is a beautiful poem: Before you cogitate to forsake me; May I step away from your nest to fly Alone in this wide and peaceful sky Holding my dreams hiding inside me, Until my life-tree sheds all its foliage Or I lose this lonely life of alienage.
You cannot afford to be alone or withdraw. Loneliness could lead to bad consequences. Read my poem Lonliness. It is good to flock together no matter the odds
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 3:03:28 AM # 1.0.0.1119
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