VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Alienage

Before you cogitate about forsake me,
May I step away from your nest to fly:
To fly alone in a wide and peaceful sky
As I'm not let anyone to get the mastery
Over my unwritten life with their maskery.
Though I'll be there on the next bough;
Away from your arrows and bow;
Holding my dreams hiding inside me,
Until my life-tree sheds all its foliage
Or I lose this lonely life of alienage.

Topic(s) of this poem: lifespan

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 2, 2012
Poem Edited: Thursday, August 18, 2016

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  • Musfiq Us ShaleheenMusfiq Us Shaleheen (11/30/2012 10:04:00 PM)

    Lovely imagery and brilliant piece of writing...i really liked it...

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  • Tajudeen ShahTajudeen Shah (11/30/2012 8:30:00 AM)

    Dear Vipins,
    Thank you very much for the read and review. well, i would love to engage myself still close with my sense towards some of your verses. kindly send me a list of the most haunting ones so that i might well be able to concentrate reading. Your support would be of great relevance. Keep penning, You are a Bard, blessed be your voyage to the virgin wilderness of imaginations and passions.

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  • Shahzia BatoolShahzia Batool (11/27/2012 7:38:00 PM)

    It was remarked for Mir Taqi Mir's felicity of expression that his reader might think that he can write with the same ease with which Mir writes, but when he tries, gets failed...the ease with which you have composed this beautiful poem reminded me of that felicity...it is a beautiful poem:
    Before you cogitate to forsake me;
    May I step away from your nest to fly
    Alone in this wide and peaceful sky

    Holding my dreams hiding inside me,
    Until my life-tree sheds all its foliage
    Or I lose this lonely life of alienage.

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (11/20/2012 3:16:00 PM)

    beautiful interconnection nature-human being-enjoyed

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  • Babatunde AremuBabatunde Aremu (11/19/2012 2:55:00 PM)

    You cannot afford to be alone or withdraw. Loneliness could lead to bad consequences. Read my poem Lonliness. It is good to flock together no matter the odds

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (11/17/2012 5:35:00 AM)

    A beautiful poignant poem with lovely imagery, brilliant write! !

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  • Asif AndalibAsif Andalib (11/17/2012 5:25:00 AM)

    I agree with Valsa George. Anyway it's a beautiful write. God bless you with caring and loving friends and family

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  • Asif AndalibAsif Andalib (11/17/2012 5:22:00 AM)

    I agree with Valsa George. Anyway it's a beautiful write. God bless you with loving and caring friend and family

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  • Sabit InceSabit Ince (11/16/2012 4:40:00 PM)

    good very nice. nice one im glad i read u

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  • Johnathan JuarezJohnathan Juarez (11/16/2012 4:01:00 PM)

    nice one im glad i read u

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  • Valerie DohrenValerie Dohren (11/6/2012 4:25:00 PM)

    No-one is alienated, we are each one little piece of a gigantic jig-saw puzzle, and one piece missing would make it incomplete. Well penned.

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  • Valsa GeorgeValsa George (11/3/2012 6:07:00 AM)

    Why do you alienate yourself from everyone? Look into yourself and count the innumerable blessings, received and look out into the wide world and see people deprived in more than one way! We miss you Vipins!

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  • Heyyou Boy (11/3/2012 4:25:00 AM)

    Interesting write. Nice flow to it. Outstanding poem! ! !

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  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (10/21/2012 9:05:00 PM)

    We need a short period of time to recuperate and get healed and if it is a life long process, something is not right! a powerful poem on loneliness!

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (10/11/2012 12:53:00 PM)

    This is another explosion poem from you vipins, i liked it a lot..the state of mind really bring me something to look about your way viewing life..but as i told you, dont be weak yet you will go astray and hard to turn back, just grab in your hand a fighter spirit and here you ready to go! _Soul

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (10/11/2012 6:22:00 AM)

    Sometimes we feel terribly alone in this wide world.
    Sometimes we do feel alienated
    But if we find in our heart
    a small spark of gratitude
    for one of our fellow humans
    this spark may grow into a fire
    brightening the lives of many
    giving us a great sense of purpose
    and lots of peace of mind
    Another good and thought provoking poem, Vipins
    Well done.

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  • Payal Parande (10/6/2012 12:51:00 PM)

    another brilliant write from a brilliant writer, incredible piece indeed

    thank you for sharing sir
    love
    payal

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  • Binish Cd (10/2/2012 8:17:00 AM)

    a good work...........well written

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