Alight Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Alight

Rating: 3.5


When vibrant faces go pale
That's when we meld to the dark landscape
When faith topples and crumbles
That's when we secret away in vain
When passionate voices go silent
That's when we neglect to pave an escape
When all but hope prevails
That's when the flame of resilience alights.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Georgios Venetopoulos 25 September 2013

Here we must became more precise and less abstract. The poem has potential though. Smiles! G.

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Patricia Grantham 07 September 2013

Hope never fails even if we lose its essence sometimes. We have to be able to move with the tides wherever it takes us in life. Hope will always come out on top. Nice write.

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