All I Have Poem by Viola Grey

All I Have

Rating: 4.4


You are an arrow
piercing my heart
with glowing joy,
rivalled only
by undying passion.

What I am
is all I have,
given to you
in this simple package...

Green eyes
that see everything,
reveal nothing,
but say so much.

Sharp teeth
biting back words,
smiling at your name,
invading my friend's
lonely tears.

Simple dreams
of happier tomorrows
shared with you
in deep abandon.

So - you, my dream,
are all I could want...
but all I have
to give to you
is what I am.

19/5/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fred Babbin 11 July 2008

Such a lovely, simple message.

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Kyle Shield Laster 09 July 2008

lovely...very. 10! !

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Hela Jug 01 July 2008

very good poem, very passionate...

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James B. Earley 01 July 2008

Introspection.....passionately expressed!

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 01 June 2008

A poem from the depth of heart...........for someone whom you love good reading

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Shirley Woods 31 July 2009

Hi Viola, I thought this was beautiful and expresses how unsure we are in love and how vulnerable. Thanks

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*Trusting You* 27 December 2008

that is all you need to give my friend. just you nothing more nothing less. good job. Becca

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Tom Balch 04 September 2008

Green eyes sharp teeth this is such a lovely piece regards Tom

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Brandon Dugan 31 July 2008

yet another great piece of work i loved it :)

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 July 2008

A good presentation of the gift of love. GW62

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