All My Life Poem by Raymond J Wright

All My Life

Rating: 5.0


I awoke this morning
to find you
sleeping in my arms
if only in my dreams

when I crawled from my blankets
I still felt you on my skin,
tasted on my lips all the places
they had been...

...and with every single breath lingers
the scent of all your sweetness...

I swear to God above
that if given a pure chance
I would take you in my arms
and love you all my life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Herbert Nehrlich1 07 October 2006

It's the simple honesty here that is profound. An excellent poem with depth and beauty. H

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Patricia Gale 30 September 2006

Beautiful, simply beautiful....

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Francesca Johnson 27 November 2006

I can only repeat what other readers have said about this poem. It's beautiful, Ray. It shows a delicious longing for someone you haven't got... Love, Fran xx

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Mark Earls 15 November 2006

This is one I can definitely appreciate- love is an oddly (im) patient thing!

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Gavin Cassens 14 November 2006

very nice. I can relate

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R, this is simply dreamy. It is where we all want to be. You take us there. In a piece that flows and is memorable. The mark of a fine poet, methinks. t x

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Daniel Roxburgh 07 October 2006

Very nice sentiments here. Your words speak of such a deep longing for the one you love. Honest and direct - I enjoyed it.

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