All Of You Poem by Practicing Poetess

All Of You

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If you walk away,
My heart calling to you
Will bring you back.
And you won't go far
Before you see, without me,
Just what you lack.

I know a man
Needs time and space
To sort things out
When you return,
Just let it be
Without a doubt

After you've had a think
And maybe had a drink
I want you to be sure
That our love will endure

So, do what you must do
But when you're back,
I want all of you.

Monday, May 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: decision,love,test,thinking ,uncertainty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 27 March 2020

So, do what you must do But when you're back, I want all of you. expression of intense desire..... i want all of you. tony

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Michael Walker 20 November 2017

A resonant line indeed: ' I want all of you'. I hope that the man walked right back to you after thinking about it.

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Practicing Poetess 21 November 2017

Ha-ha! Totally fictitious poem, Michael, as are so many of my love poems. But I do possess enough insight into men that I know that they require frequent periods of 'breathing space.' The subjects of this poem could possibly have just had a minor tiff. In any case, the woman is wise enough to realize that working things out includes allowing a man to 'do what he must do.'

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Rajnish Manga 15 May 2017

Wonderful poem of love and longing. Thanks for sharing. My heart calling to you Will bring you back. That our love will endure

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Thank-you, Rajnish! Thank you for reading, and for your positive comments and insights! :)

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