If You Want To Be Loved Poem by Practicing Poetess

If You Want To Be Loved

Rating: 4.4


If you want to be loved
(And we all do) ,
You gotta pay the price
You gotta make the sacrifice.

This journey that is shared,
It sure beats loneliness.
You must consider two,
Not only think of you.

You learn to compromise,
The art of give-and-take.
Can't always have your way,
If you want love to stay.

Recall how rich your life
Is now, because of him
Be willing to try something new,
Do the things he likes to do.

Surprise him, tantalize him,
And please him, and tease him.
Remembering all the while
How good it is to see him smile.


(c) Practicing Poetess poetry
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Tuesday, December 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: couple,love,relationship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I actually started this poem some time ago.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 08 December 2020

Your words are really true. Yes to sustain relationship we need to understand give and take art. You just made words look much better compromise as give and take art... beautiful.

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 December 2020

A beautiful poem on good relationship. It is not a one way traffic. Good understanding between two persons makes the bond of love stronger. Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

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Kostas Lagos 08 December 2020

Excellent love poem!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 December 2020

A wonderful poem with a meaningful message on love. Insightful and so true. Five Stars!

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Ray Hansell 09 December 2020

Who doesn't want this? Yes, when you have somone to love your life is very rich. I loved this poem.

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Bri Edwards 01 January 2023

five stars. PP, it's me. Remember me? Remembering is free. I found this poem listed in 'best member poems', listed as #48 today.. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 01 January 2023

DAMN! Another love poem. Ain't it sweet? Ain't it neat? What a treat! Even though ' I Hate Love Poems'. bri : )

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 November 2022

CONGRATULATIONS that this beautiful poem was chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day.on 17 th Oct 2022. A brilliant advice to al love-couples.5 Stars Top Score

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 October 2022

A wonderful poem... belated congratulations! !

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 October 2022

Beautiful write. Love is shared between two souls to make it meaningful. Everyone wishes his/her love should be reciprocated. Nice share. Congrats.

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