You're black coffee; I'm the cream
I am waking; You're the dream
I am Venus; You are Mars
You're the sky; I am your stars.
I'm the mirror; You're the shield
To your charms I gladly yield
You are blue, while I am pink
When I flash a smile, you wink
I'm the circle; You're the square
We are such a perfect pair.
You're the theme of my Erato;
When we sing, you're the vibrato.
You're the Yang to my Yin
You are why my heart does spin.
You're the horse to my cart;
I'm the muse to your art.
You're the He to my She;
You're the best part of me.
I am waking; You're the dream I am Venus; You are Mars You're the sky; I am your stars..to your charms i gladly yield........beautiful love and romantic poem. thanku. tony
Thank you, Dr. Tony, for your beautiful comment! : -)
I really like the opposites expressed in each line, the rhyming couplets - this is a really good song lyric! I used an elementary chord progression on acoustic guitar, and used the last two lines as a chorus. Thanks for penning an excellent poem and giving motivation to write some new music.
Carl, Thank YOU so much! : -) Wish there was some way that I could hear what you'd played- - I love to hear my poems set to music. Gives them a whole new life of their own!
You definitely Ace'd this love poem which draws the reader in completely with it's lovely rhyme scheme and message! And a fabulous ending as well! 10+++++++
Thank you, Aqua! Who better to be a qualified judge of the merits of a love poem, than another expert talent in the field of love poems! :)
A fine love poem, addressed to a lucky man. Brilliant use of antithesis: 'circle'-'square'; 'yin'-yang'. 'You're the best part of me'.
Thanks, Michael, but if there's a lucky man involved, I don't know who he is, and may not have even met him yet! This is poem is merely my skill in composing love poetry from my fertile imagination (one of the best gifts a writer can possess.) I hope someday to be able to present this poem to some 'lucky man' (in real life.) Antithesis is what makes the male/female thing work!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
You're the Yang to my Yin You are why my heart does spin. You're the horse to my cart; I'm the muse to your art. You're the He to my She; You're the best part of me.....very fine write..thanks
You are most welcome, Prabir. Thank YOU for reading! : -)