All That Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

All That

Rating: 3.8


Run as far as you want
Swim as deep as you can
Fly as high as you like
Go wherever you will go
Leave but don't say goodbye...


10th June 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 15 June 2009

yea, no need to say goodbye. fine expression. 10+

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~ Jon London ~ 15 June 2009

The hearts wait for it's love to return...Saying goodbye to someone, is one of the most difficult things to do...specially when you know that they'll never be returning...this piece goes alot deeper, than first read...lovely

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Lady Grace 08 July 2009

i agree with the author...this piece is well composed...''go, wherever you go but i will add the words PLEASE...don't say goodbye...''...grace

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Miriam Maia Padua 24 June 2009

very positive... ALL THAT.. ..is all we need to evade pain...and move on accept reality... i love the thoughts... 10+++ thanks Jazzle lovelots, maia

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Afzal Shauq 23 June 2009

Run as far as you want Swim as deep as you can Fly as high as you like Go wherever you will go Leave but don't say goodbye... what a sweet..short but very much meaningful poem..I think ths is one of your best poems.. I really enjoyed it much and appreciate you for this poem.. well done.. inspiring poem...10+++++++++++++++

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It reminds me of the saying 'let it go and if it comes back it is yours to keep'. It is difficult to say goodbye to loved ones and I know how you feel. Karin Anderson

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Funny how of all the physical & in some cases strenuous actions you mention...It is the one that requires the least physical effort, that is by far the most difficult action to manage....as well as the one action, that anyone who lives by their heart...will never master...no matter how many times they are forced to exercise it! Nice work, young lady...erudite & eloquent... FjR

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