For my Jeff
A cup of hot coffee
Is like your fiery eyes,
Filled with intimate passion
A love with intense emotion.
A cup of hot coffee
Is like your flaming heart,
Pleading with blazing devotion
A vow full of inspiration.
A cup of hot coffee
Is like your fervid embrace,
Soothing as ardent kisses
A flare to come to my senses!
5th September 2008
This is a very nice piece of your works.Yes, you really have what it takes.So, keep on writing. E.K.L.
Beautiful and warm like a cup of coffee especially in these winter days. Very romantic as Koyel said.....A very good write.
I really like this poem, Jazlle. I too, love my coffee. I'm sure I drink more than I should. I like the way you use the hot coffee to describe the attributes and the intensity of your relationship. I like your style. You do have a wonderful talent and I look forward to reading some more of your work. Jeff is a lucky guy. Thanks, best wishes Richard
one can almost savor the aroma rising from a still spooling hot mug of fresh brewed coffee lovely words... passionate and romantic, well written liked
A warm and charming poem for Jeff. I like your use of simile.10, for you. Kind wishes, Sandra
This is lovely, Jazlle. And your command of words is simply outstanding.
Ahhhh, Viva l'amour est beau....Like the metaphoric play....a la cafe & romance... FjR
romance inter linking with a cup of coffee is really a good idea and so much inspiring thought..appreciate your brain which think very innovative ideas..like this one and the last stanza is ruchly done in romantic way... liked it A cup of hot coffee Is like your fervid embrace, Soothing as ardent kisses A flare to come to my senses! well done and you desreve to be called here a romantic poet..with innovation..10++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'A cup of hot coffee Is like your fervid embrace, Soothing as an ardent kisses A flare to come to my senses! '... Nice, nice, nice.