A Cup Of Coffee Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

A Cup Of Coffee

Rating: 4.5


For my Jeff

A cup of hot coffee
Is like your fiery eyes,
Filled with intimate passion
A love with intense emotion.

A cup of hot coffee
Is like your flaming heart,
Pleading with blazing devotion
A vow full of inspiration.

A cup of hot coffee
Is like your fervid embrace,
Soothing as ardent kisses
A flare to come to my senses!


5th September 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

'A cup of hot coffee Is like your fervid embrace, Soothing as an ardent kisses A flare to come to my senses! '... Nice, nice, nice.

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Koyel Mitra 15 September 2008

Liked this love poem.Very romantic! A 10.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 September 2008

This is a very nice piece of your works.Yes, you really have what it takes.So, keep on writing. E.K.L.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 30 December 2008

Beautiful and warm like a cup of coffee especially in these winter days. Very romantic as Koyel said.....A very good write.

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C.R. Clark 04 January 2009

I really like this poem, Jazlle. I too, love my coffee. I'm sure I drink more than I should. I like the way you use the hot coffee to describe the attributes and the intensity of your relationship. I like your style. You do have a wonderful talent and I look forward to reading some more of your work. Jeff is a lucky guy. Thanks, best wishes Richard

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Saadat Tahir 06 August 2013

one can almost savor the aroma rising from a still spooling hot mug of fresh brewed coffee lovely words... passionate and romantic, well written liked

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Sandra Fowler 19 October 2009

A warm and charming poem for Jeff. I like your use of simile.10, for you. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Aziz Alkaabi 14 July 2009

This is lovely, Jazlle. And your command of words is simply outstanding.

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Ahhhh, Viva l'amour est beau....Like the metaphoric play....a la cafe & romance... FjR

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Afzal Shauq 24 June 2009

romance inter linking with a cup of coffee is really a good idea and so much inspiring thought..appreciate your brain which think very innovative ideas..like this one and the last stanza is ruchly done in romantic way... liked it A cup of hot coffee Is like your fervid embrace, Soothing as ardent kisses A flare to come to my senses! well done and you desreve to be called here a romantic poet..with innovation..10++++++

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