I believed in this conception
That i could be your one and only
That vision has gone down the drain
Dont cha think? ? ?
I mock ur cleverness
Remember those nights
That u were crazy for me
N when u made me scream..............................
U coaxed me in believing
My love was unadequate
In fact i showed you so much *love*
That i was always sore, night and day
There was no equinox
For me
Night always seemed to last longer....................
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Not quite the poetic language, but surely shows the pain you've put in the poem. Loved this peice as I'm a sad writer as well, keep it on.
You are a serious poet with something serious to say worth looking at. You should watch the language to be taken seriously. Well done!
wow i expected it to be more af a joke cause of your bio and you name..lol.. but man are you talented. i guess dont judge a book by its cover...very very good piece
your 'advanced' vocab, makes the peoms more unique, like your style. ~Kerli
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice poem..I liked the wors you used..maybe cuz i never heard of soemone of them..but Nice poem