Alone And Lonely Poem by sania harris

Alone And Lonely

Rating: 5.0

She ran towards me
On her face was a huge glee
She looked at her mummy and plead
“I want him mummy” she said
“I’ll name him Jim
I’ll play with him
I’ll take him for walks
I’ll make him stay away from your frocks
I’ll make him clean
Like a king I’ll let him reign
And Julie will be his queen
I’ll teach him tricks
I’ll take him with me for picnics
I’ll look after him when he is sick
I’ll always be there for him
He’ll be my only Jim
Please mummy
Can I keep him? ”
Her mummy replied with a yes
And I knew me, god really did bless
I stood away from mess
And I bent towards my new mistress
She came towards me
But moved to my right;
Where Rawky, my friend was sitting
She took him in her arms and said
“Thank you mama,
Thanks for letting me keep Jim”
My dreams were shattered
It was not me whom she wanted
I laid my head down
And closed my dark eyes
I knew I was alone
Alone in this lonely world
Because I am just a dog
An ugly and lonely stray dog

David Threadgold 02 September 2008

Hi Sania. A very touching piece of verse well done keep writting you clearly have a talent for it. a well earned 10.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 September 2008

Oh I am touched! ! ..............10

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Ershad Mazumder 16 October 2008

Thanks a lot for such a feeling.

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Ojedokun, Adeola 07 October 2008

Nice....couldn't hold back my smile. It's a lovely piece

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

Very nice poem with nice ending, love it.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 10 September 2008

Hello Sania. You had my attention and you gave a very good ending. Great read! Loyd

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Fay Slimm 08 September 2008

What a surprise ending Sania. Very well thought out and a touching poem. Ten from me.

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