Have you considered amassing
SHADOWS, grabbing them
as they float slowly through the night,
stuffing them in bushels or baskets
you carry on your nocturnal walks?
No one else is doing this. Some accidently
snag a shadow and release it
in their homes. All done in ignorance.
But for you and me no ignorance
interferes with purpose. We are alike
in our mission. Am I wrong to assert
we know each other, pure and simple,
no need to elaborate before joining fortunes?
It's agreed: we will walk together. Shadows
are born in twilight air. Meet me at the moment
the owl's outline fades into that twilight
and its hootings parallel the deepening darkness.
Street lights cast their garish brightness
into the corridors of night. We will leave
such ordinary light behind us and plunge
into darkness, like divers dropping into
the depths which summon them. They know
the dangers but cannot resist the thrills.
Are we not like that - proud of our daring?
We are joined and pledged. The darkness envelops
us, growing denser as we advance further into night.
We have left behind the adolescents racing
their bikes, the older women doing embroidery,
the young men confused by the attentions
of the young women, the old men, tapping canes
on hard ground, exercize their sore limbs.
All of them have withdrawn into an inner daylight,
while we seek immersion in the real darknesss.
We will quickly blend into a mode of things
that has endured for eons without the presence
of light. Already our outlines waver, then break
apart. We have been swallowed into the realm
of shadows. Silence envelops us in its spell.
Silence pulls us out of ourselves as we walk in wonder.
The shadows offer no resistance to our bodies
slicing through their empty forms. Their pure
thoughts penetrate our brains and take up residence
along with our native thoughts. So united, shadows
and selves become an amorphous whole. How long
will we remain poised in this strange union?
Time is suspended, space occurs elsewhere.
Here and now we are translated into pure spirits
meeting purer spirits on common ground. This is
the place from Lord Odysseus fled in fear. We feel
no fear as we pass row after row of shadows,
who bow as we pass them, so surprised we acknowledge
them. The night shifts, and we all plunge into a deeper being.
WOW! This is so cool. I love the imagery, the writing, the ideas presented here. Sign me up! The last time I thought about shadow as being was when reading Peter Pan. I'd like to write more, but need to go. This is a poem I will return to.
THIS IS A POEM I WILL RETURN TO. Me too. The poem changed especisally stanzas 3 and 4 in the third revision, so the poem surprises me when I read it. The Other Daniel may have writrten it.
This is superb. The poet seeks an amalgmation with the shadows, a union with darkness rather than running away from it. The shadows of the night are enticing n seductive n offer to make the poet whole spiritually. And the poet is not alone in his mission, he has a companion too. Together they take the plunge into darkness n emerge richer in the spiritual sense. We can grow n heal by embracing our fears. Escapism or evasion weakens our spirit. Great work.
Awesome........ How long will we remain poised in this strange union? Time is suspended, space occurs elsewhere.
One of the better poems I have read in a while. In the fourth from the last line, you may want to put the word, Which after from
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Daniel! ! ! ! ! ! This is magnificent writing- -this is so well-written it gives me the shivers deep in my soul! It stuns me- -why? - I don't know why- -because Ophelia in 3 Acts was stunning in its excellence and intelligence. This packs emotion in every word builds emotion in every line- -not surprising in the poet who wrote Daughter Remembers [forgive me if I slaughtered the title- I am writing them down from memory and memory and I are not especially close these days]. I wish the voting scale went to a million stars cuz I'd give you all them and still think I shorted you. This poem is my all-time favorite and should be Poem of the Year [being as a day is too short]! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++