Jiang Haizhou

An Ancient Mnastery In The Remote Mountains - Poem by Jiang Haizhou

A broken ancient bell
is spinning a broken cobweb and has trapped
one butterfly, one blue moth and
also several small winged insects
in the night breeze, feelinglessly

they are playing on their own swing……

Comments about An Ancient Mnastery In The Remote Mountains by Jiang Haizhou

  • Luo Zhihai (6/19/2016 5:34:00 PM)

    they are playing on their own swing

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  • Asif Andalib (10/18/2012 10:56:00 AM)

    This poem is like a beautiful painting. I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (9/16/2012 1:54:00 AM)

    Full of natural emotion. we can make contact with the nature by your great work here.
    well done Jiang..
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  • Tulip Julio Tulipan (8/29/2012 9:11:00 PM)

    Great! I love it. note: mnastery in the title lost O I think and it should be monastery. right? (Report) Reply

  • Eindaray Kyaw (8/26/2012 11:45:00 AM)

    sometimes small things can be the causes of big things.Like this poem,
    just about a simple case but can bring a big poem.Great!
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  • (8/17/2012 11:34:00 AM)

    so beautiful i can actually imagine what are you trying to show us a brilliant write i must say....
    thank you for sharing
    best wishes,
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  • Deepak Manchanda (8/10/2012 3:10:00 AM)

    Lovely imagery. So much said in so little. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 10, 2012

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