An Autumn Breeze Poem by Heather Burns

An Autumn Breeze

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AN AUTUMN BREEZE

Caught in the
mysteries of life
trying to blend

an Autumn breeze
catches

leaves rustle
carried away by
a gust of wind

Tuesday, August 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Life is also as subtle like a whiff of Autumn breeze And few realize it till its time to drop like a dry leaf.......... Great poem with maximum meaning and minimum words.

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Ramesh Rai 21 August 2014

Each words are to be felt and realised like the autumn breeze catches.

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2014

Thoughtful write Heather. We all are caught by Autumn breeze, no one can avoid it either. It will come and go. Many leaves too it carry along with it. Let us hope it carries our painful memories too along with it. Thanks for sharing with us. Loved reading it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 20 August 2014

Leaves rustle and lives tremble with the touch of autumn breeze......Heather......we are all under the laws of Nature, autumn will come and autumn will go leaving marks on leaves and lives......sweet and succinct.........

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