Sandra Fowler
W. Columbia, WV, USA
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An Enclave

Rating: 5.0
I leave you my abbreviated dusk,
A patch of blue upon a distant hill.
Fog fingers write my feelings on the glass.
Those urgent words once set the bones alight.

Friend, let that once be powerful enough
To hold time's shadow to its measurement.
West's fated slant across a million roofs
Creates an enclave worthy of itself.

Previously published, 'The International Library Of Poetry'
Cecil (cj) Krieger 31 March 2007
Always different... always captivating... always excellent... and of course, always Sandra!
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Goldy Locks 31 March 2007
does time's shadow have a measurement? will you find out & let me know. abbreviated dusk. fog fingers. kisskiss. sjg
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Robert Howard 24 March 2007
This beautiful poem taps our memories and captures a treasured mood that escapes our total comprehension. Very much an enclave.
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Magda Graf 24 March 2007
A truly beautiful poem that opens the mind.
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Mary Das 21 March 2007
Awesome! I enjoyed reading this poem.
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Mary Naylor 20 March 2007
This poem celebrates and honors the moment with its intense and hauntingly beautiful language and imagery!
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Jim Foulk 16 March 2007
a beautiful write. you do have a way with words, and putting them in the right place.
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Sylvia Spencer 16 March 2007
Sandra How sweet are these words (A Patch of Blue Upon a Distant Hill) how wonderful a genius piece of writing, you have such a way with words and this makes your poetry such a wonder to read and this poem has a description that is just perfect. Cheers Sylviex
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Esther Leclerc 16 March 2007
Your words embrace and lift, Sandra, and often transport the reader to new places and meanings... A tender work, this. Love, Esther : ]
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Brian Dorn 15 March 2007
Sandra, I love the 'fog fingers' line it has a wonderful vibrance to it. Great write! Brian
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