An Experience Poem by Ernestine Northover

An Experience

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I entered through an arched doorway,
and walked slowly down the nave,
my footsteps sounding hollow
on the worn stone floor.

With a feeling of awe, I looked upwards,
and beheld such wonders.

Multiple creations of architectural beauty,
in the meticulously carved vaulted ceiling,
built centuries ago,
with such exquisite care.

It took my breath away.

The dominance of the high altar,
resplendent in its ornamentation
and delicate tapestries.

Effigies of past Saints and knights,
ranged along the side aisles,
sculptured in stone,
standing or reclining on plinths,
regal and silent.
Frozen in time.

I felt alone in this vast structure,
even though people were drifting quietly past me.

Locating a chair I sat down,
breathing in the atmosphere,
and finding that I was held in a vacuum of power,
piety and purity,
which gave me the notion that this place,
was strangely mesmeric.

The vision of the Architect, the skills of the builders,
the dedication of the ecclesiastics,
all showing man's ability to achieve.

His Cathedral,
a towering commemoration to God,
and an amazing place to leave one's spiritual thoughts.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 11 March 2008

I can picture each scene that you describe in this poem. Wonderfully written. Andrew x

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Exquisitely crafted.

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Daniel Tyler 21 May 2006

This really suits the non-rhyming treatment. Each phrase can stand on it sown and is not subjugated to the rest of the poem but there is an overriding sens eof beauty. Well done.

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Duncan Wyllie 17 May 2006

Dear Ernestine This write has solid foundations for it was built from a beautiful heart, I love old buildings like this, such atmosphere, they seem to still the mind somehow and you have really captured a beautiful moment, not lost but held up by your words A real treat for the eye Love Duncan X

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***** ********* 17 May 2006

the serenity of your words wash over me Ernestine. A beautiful tribute to a higher spirit. I hope is well with you and yours, Smiling at you, Tai

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