Ernestine Northover

Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points (25th March 1943)

Hold You In My Smile - Poem by Ernestine Northover

Sweet moment, stay with me,
and pray do not flee so soon,
Let me enjoy the bliss of that
first kiss beneath the moon.
I wish to cradle this feeling,
that has only just been found,
A feeling that has unexpectedly
turned my world around.
Do not depart, Oh please remain
within my heart awhile,
So that I can savour you once more,
and hold you in my smile.


Comments about Hold You In My Smile by Ernestine Northover

  • Joseph Harlacher (5/25/2018 12:56:00 PM)


    hiding not far from my own personal realities minds memory this describes so well my first kiss new not at the time the reasons why i still cry a little the amount of time each smile i see on any tree that gets next to me. (Report) Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (5/23/2018 8:39:00 PM)


    Cutest Crystal Clear poem, but oh so cutest small, just a cute beautiful poem. A 10 and much much more for the vote. (Report) Reply

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (3/1/2018 11:47:00 AM)


    A lovely little piece of poetry! The lucidity of expression makes it endearing! I vote this fascinating poem with a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Lily Ives (2/13/2018 12:26:00 AM)


    Goodbyes are so hard to say... if only they would stay. Beautiful poem thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (2/11/2018 11:14:00 AM)


    Let me enjoy the bliss of that
    first kiss beneath the moon.
    I wish to cradle this feeling, oh please remain........ i hold u in love in my heart......... thank you dear poetess... tony
    (Report) Reply

  • Abhimanyu Kumar.s (12/16/2017 7:28:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem. Carpidiem (Report) Reply

  • Lea- Beima Dorestin (12/10/2017 1:27:00 AM)


    Good poem
    Keep writing
    (Report) Reply

  • Lungelo S Mbuyazi (11/26/2017 11:39:00 PM)


    Nice poem. Thanks for sharing with us (Report) Reply

  • (11/16/2017 2:10:00 PM)


    Wow beautiful (Report) Reply

  • (11/12/2017 4:54:00 PM)


    Nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Mariana Kirk (11/12/2017 7:00:00 AM)


    This is such a beautiful poem! 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rae Seagull (10/17/2017 2:03:00 PM)


    What a superb Poem, Ernestine! Loved it so much. Simple and beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (10/12/2017 7:21:00 AM)


    I can savour you once more,
    and hold you in my smile...a beautiful precise and meaningful write..10
    (Report) Reply

  • D Priyanka Singh (9/29/2017 3:25:00 PM)


    Sweet moment, stay with me,
    and pray do not flee so soon,
    Let me enjoy the bliss of that
    first kiss beneath the moon.
    Nice poem.
    (Report) Reply

  • Sasmita Rani Nayak (9/26/2017 1:37:00 AM)


    Sweet moment, stay with me,
    and pray do not flee so soon,
    Let me enjoy the bliss of that
    first kiss beneath the moon.

    A great romantic poem.
    (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Sahoo (9/5/2017 1:37:00 PM)


    Do not depart, Oh please remain
    within my heart awhile,
    So that I can savour you once more,
    and hold you in my smile.
    Nicely penned.
    10++
    (Report) Reply

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (8/29/2017 1:54:00 PM)


    A feeling that has unexpectedly
    turned my world around.
    Do not depart, Oh please remain
    within my heart awhile,
    So that I can savour you once more,
    and hold you in my smile.
    Beautiful poem.
    (Report) Reply

  • Mohit Katyal (8/17/2017 12:33:00 PM)


    Really nice.. Very fine poem (Report) Reply

  • Georgios Venetopoulos (7/24/2017 9:37:00 PM)


    The poem is about a dream, a dear remembrance of a beloved one. Oh, it's so loving and discreet! Thank you for your beautiful poetry, Ernestine! (Report) Reply

  • Pritam Bhowmick (6/25/2017 11:02:00 PM)


    Lovely work. Really well written! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 20, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 14, 2011


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