Ernestine Northover

Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points (25th March 1943)

Hold You In My Smile - Poem by Ernestine Northover

Sweet moment, stay with me,
and pray do not flee so soon,
Let me enjoy the bliss of that
first kiss beneath the moon.
I wish to cradle this feeling,
that has only just been found,
A feeling that has unexpectedly
turned my world around.
Do not depart, Oh please remain
within my heart awhile,
So that I can savour you once more,
and hold you in my smile.


Comments about Hold You In My Smile by Ernestine Northover

  • Leonila B (6/20/2017 10:58:00 PM)


    Lovely write of a poem! (Report) Reply

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  • Rajendran Muthiah (6/4/2017 4:13:00 AM)


    Excellent poem on love. One cannot forget the lines sweet for ever. (Report) Reply

  • Jeanette Telusma (5/27/2017 5:11:00 AM)


    Wonderful thought, this was a lovely portion. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (4/8/2017 11:18:00 PM)


    Lovely words, pearly feeling and an asset created out of a blissful moment. Invaluable. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Janel Roberts (2/14/2017 11:15:00 AM)

    beautiful
    This poem is amazing, I like it 😊 (Report) Reply

  • Diana Rose Tolentino (1/16/2017 8:41:00 AM)


    if only someone will say these words to me.. bliss oh bliss. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (1/6/2017 2:30:00 PM)

    tom allport
    just one of life's many experiences, lucky you? (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/28/2016 1:12:00 AM)

    Love and dreams
    First kiss beneath the moon! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2016 11:40:00 PM)


    wonderful...just wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2016 5:49:00 PM)

    Hold You In My Smile
    Lovely, wistful words! (Report) Reply

  • Louise Mcgowan (10/19/2016 12:39:00 PM)

    Hold you in my smile
    Loved it very writing, Thank You For Sharing (Report) Reply

  • Mary-lisa Russo (9/27/2016 9:23:00 PM)


    Seriously in love with this work of art! Thank you for posting! (Report) Reply

  • Benjamin Wiche (8/24/2016 9:38:00 AM)


    Remain with me
    deep within
    let this smile stay.
    lovely poem Do not depart, Oh please remain
    within my heart awhile,
    So that I can savour you once more,
    and hold you in my smile.
    (Report) Reply

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (7/27/2016 6:36:00 AM)


    Let me enjoy the bliss of that
    first kiss beneath the moon.
    I wish to cradle this feeling,
    that has only just been found,
    A feeling that has unexpectedly
    turned my world around.
    Ah it's really really an erotic poem. Thanks for sharing the lovely poem.10 for it.
    Subhas
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/2/2016 1:42:00 AM)


    I really love this one. (Report) Reply

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/23/2016 7:25:00 AM)


    Let me enjoy the bliss of that
    first kiss beneath the moon.
    I wish to cradle this feeling,
    that has only just been found,
    A feeling that has unexpectedly
    turned my world around.

    Wow, how erotic is the composition.
    Lovely sequence, creating the perfect mood for the first kiss under the moon.
    Nice and beautiful one.
    You deserve 10 for it.
    (Report) Reply

  • (4/1/2016 11:34:00 PM)


    Marvelously conceived stunning yet very simple poem. Heartiest Congrats on the Poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (4/1/2016 11:07:00 PM)


    Very sweet poem Ernestine. Nicely done! (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (4/1/2016 10:45:00 PM)


    A sweet and lovely poem. Simple and beautiful! ! (Report) Reply

  • Melissa Patty (4/1/2016 4:33:00 PM)


    Can I just say that this poem was absolutely a pleasure to read, very creative! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 20, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 14, 2011


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