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Hold You In My Smile

Rating: 4.2

Sweet moment, stay with me,
and pray do not flee so soon,
Let me enjoy the bliss of that
first kiss beneath the moon.
I wish to cradle this feeling,
that has only just been found,
A feeling that has unexpectedly
turned my world around.
Do not depart, Oh please remain
within my heart awhile,

So that I can savour you once more,
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 29 August 2017

A feeling that has unexpectedly turned my world around. Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile. Beautiful poem.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 05 September 2017

Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile. Nicely penned. 10++

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 April 2016

Marvelously conceived stunning yet very simple poem. Heartiest Congrats on the Poem of the Day.

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Benjamin Wiche 24 August 2016

Remain with me deep within let this smile stay. lovely poem Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile.

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Mohit Katyal 17 August 2017

Really nice.. Very fine poem

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Khairul Ahsan 06 December 2020

So profound! Every reader will remember the memory of their first kiss when s/he reads this poem. Heartiest congratulations on your poem’s selection as the ‘Modern Poem of the Day’!

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 December 2020

Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile. /// a heartiest loving poem penned; from the core of heart the love has been expressed; this beautiful smile; this uttered the soft voice, this arm, this beautiful surrounding; this neat and clean all only for the love and living with the peaceful heart; an enjoyable loving poem

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Soul 2 Soul 06 December 2020

Love my soul mate and this poem is for my soulmate, cradling

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Lyn Paul 06 December 2020

A beautiful way to remember that special person and passing the joy on to others with your smile.

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Savita Tyagi 06 December 2020

A sweet moment of life caught beautifully to spreads its bliss. Amazing is power of words.

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