An Idea Poem by Jacqui Broad

An Idea

Rating: 5.0


I want to fly,
but I know I can't.
So I thought,
how to satisfy this want.
The wind gave me
the answer.
Thinking about a kite,
flying like a dancer.
I'm gonna make
myself one.
Luckily I still remember
how it's done.
And next time I have
this desire to fly,
I will use my kite,
to be a bird in the sky...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kara Towe 29 November 2011

So sweet. I like to fly kites too. You really captured the experience. I felt like I was flying a kite. Thanks for the fun.

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Harindhar Reddy 05 November 2011

Gorden Bennett! I want to fly above the sky so high. i want to fly up in the air and feel the natural air but I can't. Ha! Ha! Ha! This is one of the sweetest rhymes of life time. I shower praise the poetess only because I love the impressive ways of writing. i can Just wish you a Smashing day with to many smile along with mile stones in the life! He! He! :) :) :) 'I want to fly, but I know I can't. So I thought, how to satisfy this want.'

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Melancholy Man 19 October 2011

Fantastic poem - too often in life we make ourselves miserable focusing on what we can't do, rather than seeking fun or pleasure in what we can do. Great work.

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Unwritten Soul 16 October 2011

Free mind...i feel so free...even without wings i can feel the wind wrapped all around me, like a kite :) , we can fly in poetry...and it's work here :) _Unwritten Soul

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Crimson Love 15 October 2011

Beautiful poem, an amazing poem, from an even more amazing poet. :)

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