Flying Lemming

Rookie - 95 Points (England)

An Idiot - Poem by Flying Lemming

I'd love to be an idiot,
And never have a care.
About the crap that's in the sea,
Or poison in the air.

I want to be an idiot,
And never be afraid.
Of the snipers deadly gun,
Or muggers slicing blade.

I long to be an idiot,
And live in my own world.
Where violence doesn't raise its head,
And no abuse is hurled.

I beg to be an idiot,
Not waiting by the phone.
And even when I'm by myself,
I'd never feel alone.

I wish to be an idiot,
A dim and dozy dope.
Whatever things went wrong with life,
I'd never give up hope.

Yes, if I was an idiot,
Hatred, hurt and pain.
Would never ever bother me
And I'd be born again.

But, if I was an idiot,
And missed out all the strife.
I'd miss out all the other things,
That make up every life.

The heartfelt words, the warmth, the love,
The closeness and all that.
I don't want to be an idiot,
I think I'll stay a PRAT


Comments about An Idiot by Flying Lemming

  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/8/2014 9:39:00 AM)

    I don't want to be an idiot,
    I think I'll stay a PRAT
    A well written poem which about the intellect which makes to feel the real pain of life and the negating the fact ultimately to be out from the clutches of understanding and realization. Most of the lesson we learn when they become useless.A good read
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
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  • Akhtar Jawad (5/5/2014 12:05:00 AM)

    Flying Lemming is from England, and I don't know anyone from England who has no love for cricket. Sir Don Bradman, may be described by craps and snipers as an idiot batsman who played unbooked and ugly shots, but it doesn't make any difference to that great batsman. He was great, he is great and he will remain great.
    I really liked this poem.
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  • (5/8/2012 4:49:00 AM)

    Your poem is about the end justifying the means. However, the last two verses sum things up, and has justified the entire poem. Really enjoyed it. (Report)Reply

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  • Adeline Foster (3/14/2012 4:44:00 PM)

    Great poem, well said, well written. Great can I top that? I doubt it.
    Adeline
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  • (9/8/2008 11:35:00 AM)

    It's about experiencing life's joys and sorrows...and the intellect....to know....the difference! (Report)Reply

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  • (7/11/2008 4:48:00 PM)

    With the world heading where it is, I don't know whether being ignorant would be less painful or not. Great job! (Report)Reply

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  • (5/27/2008 6:07:00 AM)

    Sometimes I think some idiots might be running things and those of us that are not idiots need to keep speaking up to them. Loved your poem. Sincerely, Connie Webb (Report)Reply

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  • (3/24/2008 5:30:00 PM)

    This is only the first I have read of yours but
    if its an indication of others in your collection.
    I'll be back many times. I really enjoy reading
    a writer who knows what he's doing. Your
    work is wonderful!

    GW62
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  • (3/4/2008 8:33:00 PM)

    It would ratchet down the stress of daily life. Very amusing, FL. Thanks for sharing it.

    Don
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  • (9/21/2007 1:24:00 PM)

    Good poem; my favorite line is 'A dim and dizzy dope'. Great job! (Report)Reply

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  • Colin J... (9/2/2007 12:09:00 PM)

    ' And even when I'm by myself,
    I'd never feel alone.'

    I have always felt like this...
    Lovely poem, will read all your others...
    Colin J...
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  • (9/1/2007 4:58:00 PM)

    This is a really well written poem. It really makes me think about being an idiot myself.... (Report)Reply

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  • (8/21/2007 4:21:00 PM)

    This is a great poem and i wish i could write like this. i love it. its actually made me smile which i haven't done in a long time. in fact i really love this poem i thing its one of my favourites (Report)Reply

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  • Evaughn Gray (8/11/2007 3:14:00 PM)

    this id a good poem made me think about it....~hazel (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 7, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 31, 2011


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