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An Innocent Voyeur

Rating: 4.7
An old man glances through a window
to one in the building below.
Through slats awry in seduction's haste,
candlelight strobes
on sweat-glistened bodies.

He watches, transfixed,
at the images through the blinds,
his eyes too frozen to obey.
(Turn your head! Go to bed!)
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Shannon Chapel 06 December 2005
How sad! Poor old guy all worked up and he didn't even get any action! lol Well done. I like! S
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Allan James Saywell 14 March 2005
Very nice work on an old subject, typical c.j heck poem no stone left unturned a true poets account of an event warm regards AJS
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Lenchen Elf 14 March 2005
Sensitively handled, you left all players with the dignity of their humanity
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Michael Shepherd 14 March 2005
Nice one, CJ. It has prompted a response from this old man - in print, that is!
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Christine Magee 14 March 2005
A beautifully written and atmospheric poem. Excellent indeed. Chrissie
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Lare Austin 14 March 2005
Just the perfect temperature, C J...just right...I see you did not 'procrastinate' too long...thank you for sharing...very well done... Lare
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Rusty Daily 14 March 2005
CJ, I do like the way you give room for the reader to determine their own level of sensual feelings. Softly teasing as always. Rusty
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kenneth william snow 14 March 2005
Very powerful and vivid C.J. Nice work
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