Subhas Chandra Chakra

Gold Star - 120,297 Points (13 Oct / Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India)

An Ode To Your Beauty -02 - Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

It was the loveliest..

The loveliest of the moments..


The moment you looked at me

And smiled my answer back..

To the eternal query of my heart

Whether you-

Feel the way I do?

Topic(s) of this poem: love, love and art, love and friendship

Form: Free Verse


Comments about An Ode To Your Beauty -02 by Subhas Chandra Chakra

  • Alina KaikeyiAlina Kaikeyi (9/29/2017 2:21:00 PM)

    The moment you looked at me
    And smiled my answer back..
    To the eternal query of my heart
    Whether you-
    Feel the way I do?
    Nice poem shared. So artistic?
    10+++
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    Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra(12/12/2017 10:27:00 AM)

    Alina, Thanks for these nice remarks.

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  • Sanjukta SahooSanjukta Sahoo (8/25/2017 7:31:00 AM)

    The moment you looked at me
    And smiled my answer back..
    To the eternal query of my heart
    Whether you-
    Feel the way I do?
    Beautiful poem sir. Thanks for the style of both- the poem and its heroine.
    10++++ for them.
    Sanjukta.
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    Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra(12/12/2017 10:27:00 AM)

    Thank you. Thanks Sanjukta for these nice remarks.

    Alina KaikeyiAlina Kaikeyi(11/8/2017 1:00:00 PM)

    Yes, really I loved this poem Didi, I agree with you. A real ode to beauty.

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  • Sabita SahooSabita Sahoo (6/24/2017 4:29:00 PM)

    The moment you looked at me
    And smiled my answer back.
    Beautiful, Simple, small yet enjoyable.
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    Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra(12/12/2017 10:28:00 AM)

    Thank you, Thanks Sabita for these nice remarks.

    Alina KaikeyiAlina Kaikeyi(11/8/2017 12:59:00 PM)

    Yes, really I loved this poem Didi, I agree with you. Eternal beauty is there.

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  • Seema Sharma RimiSeema Sharma Rimi (6/24/2017 3:24:00 PM)

    The loveliest of the moments..

    The moment you looked at me
    And smiled my answer back..
    To the eternal query of my heart...The eternal quest of the heart for the lover's recognition.
    Thanks for the sharing.
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    Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra(12/12/2017 10:28:00 AM)

    Yes Rini, Thanks for these nice remarks.

    Alina KaikeyiAlina Kaikeyi(11/8/2017 12:59:00 PM)

    Yes, really I loved this poem Didi, I agree with you. A rare poem shared.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 17, 2017

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 5, 2017


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