An Ode To Your Beauty -03 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

An Ode To Your Beauty -03

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You stood there-
There before me,
Waves dashed upon
The shore around me,
Kids shouted merrily
Dancing on their knee..

Young hearts had hands
To hold one in one,
Shoulders to rest upon,
Warm moments to hug with
And Thirsty lips to kiss..

But I had you, the one,
And only one on this planet
To hold on my reels
To behold all that thrills
When my Angel stands still
Yet Whirlpools within me.

And then there was nothing
But an aura of cosmic beauty
Reaching through the Eyes
That looked at me! !

An Ode To Your Beauty -03
Saturday, June 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art,love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 November 2017

I just finished reading all the three poems of An Ode to Your beauty. Having been a student of aesthetics all of my life, i enjoyed these poems thoroughly. Life is beautiful. But one must have eyes that can perceive beauty. And you have them Subhas ji. More iimportantly, to realise that beauty is all around us - love, art, nature, friendship; even our dreams become beautiful. Top marks for these beautiful poems!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 December 2017

Thanks revered poetess for these nice remarks. I am obliged.

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Alina Kaikeyi 29 September 2017

And then there was nothing But an aura of cosmic beauty Reaching through the Eyes That looked at me! ! Wow, nice poem shared. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 December 2017

Thanks my dear for these nice remarks.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 25 August 2017

And then there was nothing But an aura of cosmic beauty Reaching through the Eyes That looked at me! ! Nice lines...from a beautiful ode to the beautiful lady. Thanks for the sharing.10++ for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 December 2017

Thanks Sanjukta dear for these nice remarks.

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Alina Kaikeyi 08 November 2017

An ode to beauty well expressed. Yes, really I loved this poem Didi, I agree with you.

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Sabita Sahoo 24 June 2017

Young hearts had hands To hold one in one, Shoulders to rest upon, Warm moments to hug with And Thirsty lips to kiss.. But I had you, the one, And only one on this planet Words so delicately chosen.. Nice poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 December 2017

Thanks Sabita dear for these nice remarks.

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Alina Kaikeyi 08 November 2017

Yes, really I loved this poem Didi, I agree with you. An ode to beauty well expressed.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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