An Unbloomed Dream Poem by Bharati Nayak

Real love is so strong that the dreams around it can happen at any moment. Beautiful poem on love.I would decor the million moments of my life.....

Vharati- this gem is on my fav poem list and I love re-reading it time after time- -it is great poetry that feels as fresh and lovely the 20th time as the first time.- - - - -> All the unuttered words / Pouring out from the secret chambers/ Of my heart, , < =- - - - - Only pure poetic genius can pen these words. 10 million stars for this beauty! ! ! I would string them like a pearl necklace

A beautiful poem! Don't do partiality please! I have read some of your poems but I have not yet received a return comment from you...OK madam please do as you feel...

Are 'His' and 'He' referring to 'God' or 'your Husband', ....OR to 'ME'? ? bri : )

........HEY! , PoemHUNTER, I'm 'hunting' for the comment I was working on when...POOF! ! ..PH (I guess) stole it. : (

I liked your lines 1-7. From line 8 onward I got a bit....OK, 'quite a bit', ......uncertain of your meaning, & failing to feel comfortable with my

Bharati, I've LOOKED but not FOUND 'decor' listed as a verb, only a noun, . So I will READ decor as 'decorate' in your poem! : )

I happy that poetess Magadha who has left this sphere has put a wonderful comment.