An Undeniable Letter To A Farrier Who Lives In A Remote Village Poem by nimal dunuhinga

An Undeniable Letter To A Farrier Who Lives In A Remote Village

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Dear Smith,
My stallion is ready for the grand race and I promised him to buy new shoes.
That should be durable and not fashionable.
I want you to explain my situation dear,
I have a holey wallet in that never remains the colored notes.
My Windmill is very familiar with the racecourse and I am sure he would bring the prize home, this is a humble requirement and invitation from a forgotten old friend.
sincerely,
The lame jockey Surmise.

*Postscript
I hope you still collect the old coins and I have few silver that I can polish for you.My broken door is open at all for my drunkard old friends.

Saturday, August 2, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: old,forgotten,silver
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 18 April 2009

Insinuations flood this fine poem that shares the wily words of your impoverished and lame jockey. You give the reader a minimum of information to create a maximum of impact. Great work Nimal. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 02 August 2008

One can read much between the lines of this enigmatic letter. A fascinating story, Nimal. Ten for this. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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