An Unforgettable Blossom Poem by nimal dunuhinga

An Unforgettable Blossom

Rating: 5.0


If you bloom at the razor's edge,
Then I have to get ready for the war my dearest.
If I die in the battlefield,
Please bury me in an unknown lover's graveyard.

* A young recruit scribbles on the rifle butt while resting in a campsite.

Wednesday, August 27, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 06 September 2008

Your words inspire, enchant and touch the heart of the reader. Another beautiful example of your magnificent poetic craft. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 27 August 2008

Lovely, poignant, elegiac. Everything that a good-bye poem should be. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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