Thoughtless I am, I've chosen you over all else.
I will burn cities for you.
I would sacrifice my innocence for you.
I will never let you give up.
Runaway with me my love, for the world is dead set on keeping us apart.
I will do everything I can, and everything I cannot do, for you.
And if you are to die, you will die in my arms, and no where else.
And in my burning rage, and immortal love, I will storm the very gates of,
Heaven
Nirvana
Vahalla
Or whatever heaven substiute you have been sent to.
For that is all you deserve, heaven, and nothing less.
And remember as I fall, you are the only reason I rise again, for I am not human, but a beast.
A beast that has been tamed by your beauty, exteral and internal.
For Olette and Alie
Tlhe subject lady of this poem should really be honored, for not many will do all the things your will do for her. Written with authority and plenty of gusto. Good Job. Your friend Lynn
So very beautiful. Well penned and very deserving of being chosen. Congrats!
Lovely poem. Can be interpreted on many levels. It's great with intensity of emotions.
There is such a word as RUNAWAY, but it is a noun. Here you should have used two words: RUN AWAY. Congratulations on having this poem selected as Member Poem of the Day!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love this poem. Reminded me of when I felt that way, almost made me cry. Its beautiful.