And As I Fall (Follow Up To No Matter What) Poem by Adrian Cordova

And As I Fall (Follow Up To No Matter What)

Rating: 3.4


Thoughtless I am, I've chosen you over all else.
I will burn cities for you.
I would sacrifice my innocence for you.
I will never let you give up.
Runaway with me my love, for the world is dead set on keeping us apart.
I will do everything I can, and everything I cannot do, for you.
And if you are to die, you will die in my arms, and no where else.
And in my burning rage, and immortal love, I will storm the very gates of,
Heaven
Nirvana
Vahalla
Or whatever heaven substiute you have been sent to.
For that is all you deserve, heaven, and nothing less.
And remember as I fall, you are the only reason I rise again, for I am not human, but a beast.
A beast that has been tamed by your beauty, exteral and internal.

For Olette and Alie

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cassandra Nicks 10 July 2010

I love this poem. Reminded me of when I felt that way, almost made me cry. Its beautiful.

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Cira Cortes 30 June 2010

i really like this one :) 10!

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loNeLY AnGel 19 April 2010

i love this poem...... well done.....10/10

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Leila Taghavi 18 April 2010

You could write the poem lovely. congratulations!

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Lynn Glover 18 April 2010

Tlhe subject lady of this poem should really be honored, for not many will do all the things your will do for her. Written with authority and plenty of gusto. Good Job. Your friend Lynn

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Bernard Snyder 25 July 2015

So very beautiful. Well penned and very deserving of being chosen. Congrats!

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Savita Tyagi 25 July 2015

Lovely poem. Can be interpreted on many levels. It's great with intensity of emotions.

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Ruby Mostazir 25 July 2015

Nice! I love this poem

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Kim Barney 25 July 2015

There is such a word as RUNAWAY, but it is a noun. Here you should have used two words: RUN AWAY. Congratulations on having this poem selected as Member Poem of the Day!

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 July 2015

It is really a good poem with love flowing thick.

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