And Then Stupor Takes Over Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

And Then Stupor Takes Over

Rating: 5.0


You might perchance think: why this change of face,
But things do change. Notso be from change free.
Give me one chance; he pleaded, just one grace;
Unable to think of life without me,
He came up with this time-tested a plea:
Time changes and I'd too— for my own sake.
Look, my life's a golf ball hanging on tee,
And agreed I, not sure though what it'd take.
The life when lurks on point of no return,
Oft turns, prodded by head, much less by heart,
Nor yet knows what it wants, nor where to turn,
And my life had become oh a push cart.
You get when frozen snow sinks down lower,
Chilly frost's felt and stupor takes over.
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Sonnets | 02.11.16 |

Friday, April 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: change,husband,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dream turning into a nightmare, life has turned into hell. Here a man pleads to his wife to give him one last chance, and going against her gut feelings she agrees. When one gets frozen in snow, the chill benumbs, and then stupor takes over.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 05 April 2019

Time changes and I'd too— for my own sake../// great impressive

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 April 2019

Thanks Mahtab Bangalee, may I invite you to read my comments below, and know how you feel?

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 April 2019

A well crafted poem, sir Aniruddha....10++++++++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 April 2019

It is not my cup of tea to write sentimental stuff. But when I do i see them liked. And this is a dilemma. I don't know what makes it go. Is it the restraint I appy. I'd be thankful to if you have something to say. But thanks for your liberal rating, Bernard Asuncion.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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