Anesthetic Poem by Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler

Anesthetic

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i have made a mistake
i have made several mistakes
they all started when i left you
and i have tried in vain
to kill the pain
but the pain is killing me
can't go back and change the past
must move forward
barrel on thru
like a lorry with all the brakes out
i may try to pump the pedal
but i can never stop
all the while i lick my wounds
i made my bed
now i must sleep in it
even tho
i would much prefer
to sleep on the floor

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amberlee Carter 14 December 2004

ya know, those last two lines are brilliant..the epitome of being lovesick and without...well done, Always, amberlee

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