Theodora (Theo) Onken

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~angel~ - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

...Where beauty flies...
Wisdom cries
...Near the runes...
Upon the ancient tomb's
...Where in days of yore...
All knew the germanic lore
...Of the village and it's gore...
Long ago and before
...But beauty she still flies...
Upon Angel Wings
...Her wisdom cries...
For all of the victims lives
...And the weak that did not survive...
She lives to tell her story this day
...But flies with wings to make her way...
And upon a harp she plays her sorrows songs
...About a Tale of So Much Wrong...
One wrong does not deserve one right
...One right does not deserve one wrong...
Beauty she still flies upon Wisdom's wings
...And sings of todays horrendous wrongs...
In a World where Evil reigns
...But Goodness and mercy belongs...


Comments about ~angel~ by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • (9/7/2007 11:44:00 PM)

    Duncan,
    You are just the sweetest person!
    I thank you from the bottom of my heart!
    Blessings back to you always,
    Theo
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  • (9/5/2007 1:16:00 PM)

    Goodness and mercy, two beautiful words that carry a power in themselves,
    Thankyou for this
    Love duncan X
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  • (9/4/2007 12:51:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Meggie and elysebeth for your very kind words!
    You are both so very generous!
    Blessings,
    Theo
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  • (8/31/2007 2:39:00 AM)

    this is beautiful..love this, Theo..thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Elysabeth Faslund (6/26/2007 5:17:00 PM)

    You know things od ancient wisdom and the modern interpretation of them! You have put these together beautifully! xxElysabeth (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2007 4:47:00 AM)

    What can I say that hasn't been said before about this beautiful poem. The story line may be ancient, but could fit so well into today's society. Top Mark. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem my friend.
    David
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  • Melvina Germain (6/25/2007 10:01:00 PM)

    Wonderful flow, excellent rhyme, I love when a poem rhymes beautifully as shown here. A beautiful ancient story, love it.--Melvina-- (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2007 10:43:00 AM)

    I just watched the movie Braveheart.....and reading this I picture the green highlands as your backdropp to this wonderful poem...love it (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2007 3:40:00 AM)

    I love this poem, its like one of the anciant anglo saxon tales in style, brilliantly written Theodora....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 25, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 16, 2011


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