Angel Of The Arenaceous Beach Poem by Michael Fischer
Angel Of The Arenaceous Beach
She sits on the arenaceous beach
with her legs extended out in front
and her hands behind her back
as she takes in the glorious day.
The borrowed ocean slides off
of her glistening bronze stature
as the sand cushions her long legs
and penetrates her curling toes.
I'd give just about everything I had
just to shrink down to one foot tall;
So I could sit on her luxurious lap
and admire her beauty forever!
Michael your poem is beautifully written, sensually described with passion. It stays in my mind. Thank you for your comments on my poem Niagara Falls, how lucky you are to live so close. I will think of you being there with my poem. You have made me happy!
Sensual indeed and deeply unusual.... playful too and kind of sexy. A lovely read. t x
Great imagery, but is this some strange desire to be a baby again? Freud would have fun with this! -chuck
This is a beautiful sensual poem with an unexpected twist in the final stanza. You express your passion with an whimsy and more than the hint of a smile. Great poem. love, Allie xxxxxxx
Just make sure you have the anti-dote for coming back to full size...lol Sensual piece, oh how the mind works!
I can easily relate to those feelings but bear in mind you must be careful what you wish for it may not turn out as you might want Would you really want to be one foot tall
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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hahaha... this poem rocks! i love it! ! ! Keep it up <3Lynn<3