Brittany Hafer

Apex Of The Malstrum

secluded from your present
is all your future will ever be
living life as the prophet
but no audience shall seek for you
lost since the day you were born
with no north star to guide you by
franticly searching
as the meaningless ant
still no hope of a better past-time
east to west
north to south
pursued ever onward
by nothing for nothing

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 3, 2008

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  • Alan CurtisAlan Curtis (5/16/2009 6:51:00 PM)

    Its hard 2 put my comment n2 words for this one Brit!

    Simply sweet! !
    Peace,
    Hippy Sav

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  • James MclainJames Mclain (4/16/2009 10:57:00 PM)

    Ant's never get lost...unless they lose their dreams...nice poem..thanks..iip..I have a few ant poems..

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  • Darkness Everywhere (2/6/2009 10:24:00 AM)

    thats really sweet. very well written well done keep writing

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  • James Roberts (12/5/2008 9:34:00 AM)

    very very soleful somehow we all get lost in the storm from time to time
    jim

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  • ! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~!! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! (12/5/2008 9:34:00 AM)

    ahhhhh what a sweet poem again
    nice one keep writing

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  • **Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man (9/14/2008 8:20:00 AM)

    if there was any eara of the past you could travle back in time to visit, I wonder
    wich would it be? , if you could pick one and write about it i would love to read.

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  • Naé Tyler (9/3/2008 2:34:00 PM)

    I like this, good job

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