Dawn Slanker


Apiphobia (A Trigee) - Poem by Dawn Slanker

For those unfamiliar with the 'trigee' form...you read the left half, then the right half, then follow the dots read the two halves together as a whole. It's 3 poems in one. The trick is that each of the 3 parts should be able to stand alone as a poem.

The Trigee form was created by TD Euwaite, founder of poetsofmars.com

Apiphobia

wicked wing*ed creatures..............evil stingers flit and race,
dartin' through the veggie patch.....they quickly set a rapid pace
they target tender features..............while buzzin' 'round my fearful face
'cause I am an easy catch...............they tease and then begin the chase


Comments about Apiphobia (A Trigee) by Dawn Slanker

  • (7/12/2012 3:22:00 PM)

    Enjoyed this form of poetry, although I just came here from your trigee Free Choice which is even more clever! (Or cleaver, as PT D might say) . (Report)Reply

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  • (2/24/2009 1:57:00 PM)

    Dear Dawn

    I am intrigued

    I have invented an identical form
    I called it Cleave Poetry

    here is the link
    http: //cleavepoetry.wordpress.com/

    do you know who invented Trigee?

    Thanks
    Phuoc-Tan
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  • (8/14/2008 5:42:00 AM)

    A new form to me but it excites my imagination Thoroughly enjoyed ivor (Report)Reply

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  • (8/6/2008 3:59:00 AM)

    'Hi! ',

    your a wonderful poet. This is an excellent Trigee. you have done well on this.

    WELL DONE!
    Cheers :)
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  • (7/29/2008 10:37:00 AM)

    Tri... umphant trigee. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/13/2008 7:50:00 PM)

    I've not seen this type of poetry before, but I enjoyed reading it. Very creative and unconventional. I may give this Trigee a try myself- thanks for sharing!
    ^_^
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  • (7/12/2008 11:12:00 PM)

    this trigee thing is something new to me...and it's very cool...I really don't think I could do this, so you have my utmost respect...very well written. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 24, 2009


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