Dawn Slanker

In God's Garden Canvas (Altered Rondeau) - Poem by Dawn Slanker

In God's garden canvas

In God's garden canvas, I am the brush;
each stroke deliberate...I never rush.
Creating textured layers as I go,
allying pigment, applying VanGogh.
In reverance, I work in whispered hush.

The Earth, a chalice of flowering rush,
does make this artist's seed burst forth and gush
granting life to lovely violaceous.
In God's garden canvas.

I adopt diffused hues of Claude Monet;
exploit lines, plant colors, the Matisse way.
Sow the obscure lines of Picasso's heart.
Harvest the emotion from Renoir's art.
I am a creative vessel of aide.
In God's garden canvas.

©2008 Dawn Slanker

Comments about In God's Garden Canvas (Altered Rondeau) by Dawn Slanker

  • (8/14/2008 5:49:00 AM)

    Good use of one of my favourite forms (Report) Reply

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  • (7/6/2008 6:24:00 PM)

    The rhyme and pattern was a little too uneven for me, so I could not give it a reading score. It was quite creative and worthy of some work on that aspect.

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  • (7/6/2008 9:37:00 AM)

    Some beautiful language in this one, well done

    Take care
    Love duncan X
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  • Vidyadhar Durgekar (7/5/2008 10:30:00 PM)

    Harevst the emotions from Renoirs heaart........
    An excellent piece of work with good usage metaphor.....
    Theme is catching with garden of canvas for life.I liked it my 10
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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 11, 2008

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