Apologies Poem by Rini Shibu

Apologies

Rating: 5.0


Apologies after hurting to the core
I shall collect all in a box and store
Will parcel on that day to your grave
Hope God won't be tired counting to save

Sunday, February 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: forgiving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
White Tiger 09 February 2018

Hi Rini, It is a good write, to the point. I read into this poem as letting God forgive, but the person recieving the apologies has been hurt too deep, so shes storing and passing on to God. 10+++

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Rini Shibu 09 February 2018

Thanks Charlie for your comment..! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 February 2018

Hi Rini, Very emotive poem, as usual. It is said, keeping a wound in the heart hurts us more; so we should learn to forgive and forget. Easier said than done. There are wounds that take time to heal. May be, putting the hurt down in the form of this poem has eased the tension. May be the wound has started healing now! All the best Rini.

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Rini Shibu 09 February 2018

Thanks for your wonderful comment

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Paul Brookes 04 February 2018

Clever write enjoyed God had infinity so he never gets tired weary i suppose enjoyed thanks 10 ++

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Rini Shibu 04 February 2018

Thanks Brookes, but sure won't get time to read others

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2018

Hurting to the core! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 04 February 2018

Thanks Edward.! !

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Practicing Poetess 04 February 2018

Good poem, Rini! It is never too late to forgive.

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Rini Shibu 04 February 2018

Thanks poetess.! ! But some never stop poking

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