Armchair Adventures Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Armchair Adventures

Rating: 5.0

My parents wanted me to be a star,
but all I ever wanted was my books.
My talents couldn't take me very far,
and I was doomed to failure with my looks,
yet I have read of places far and near,
and I have learned of all the lakes and brooks.
My books have taken me to the frontier,
to lands of dragons, kings, and noble knight.
I can be gone a week, a month, a year;
my readings tend to give me much delight.
I've had more pleasure than most anyone;
I read by day and even more by night.
My needs are few, and money have I none,
but all in all, I've had a lot of fun.

Armchair Adventures
Sunday, November 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: books
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(This is a Terza Rima Sonnet) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -This poem was entered in the 2018 NFSPS (National Federation of State Poetry Societies) contest and took third place in Category 48: Miriam S. Strauss Memorial Award. This category required using Terza Rima Sonnet,14 lines iambic pentameter, rhyme scheme: aba bcb cdc ded ee. I had never heard of the Terza Rima Sonnet before, but I wrote this one for the contest, and this is the only one I have ever written. Written in February or March 2018.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darwin Henry Beuning 20 November 2018

Kim, very nice.! ! I rate a 10

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wes vogler 22 November 2018

You do put yourself to the tasks, , I am far too lazy and would find the structure onerous. congratulations and by the way it ultimately reads very well

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Kim Barney 20 November 2018

Thanks, Hank! Funny thing about this poem: One of the judges in the contest (the one who judged this category) accidentally put the wrong code number on this poem, and it got credited to some lady in Florida! But when she received her check and certificate, she notified NFSPS that she had not written this poem, and two weeks and many phone calls later, it got straightened out and I finally got credit for it!

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