Abderrahmane Dakir

As A Firefighter Is My Mother - Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

As a firefighter is my mother,
She might climb my ladder,
To fight my fire by water.

Her life is burning in my upbringing,
How many gifts I should have given.

Her joy strengthens my body to stand,
For kissing her forehead, feet, and hand.

Her sight is shining brightly as a sun ray,
That can guide me when I was astray.

Her voice is calling me sweetly to say,
'Take care of yourself, are you ok? '.

As a firefighter is my mother,
She might climb my ladder,
To fight my fire by water.

Topic(s) of this poem: friendship, life, love, mother

Comments about As A Firefighter Is My Mother by Abderrahmane Dakir

  • (1/19/2016 5:15:00 PM)

    Very descriptive expression of your mother, the shining light of your life like a fire of love burning within you. What a wonderful woman she must be for you, her son to write such a beautiful tribute to her! Having two sons, talking with them every day, asking them if they're alright and telling them to be careful, I can identify with the love your mother has for you. Awesome poem! Thank you for sharing your mother's love with us. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir (1/20/2016 2:38:00 AM)

    Thank you for this awesome comment. After God's love there is mother's love that give us the warmth in this life.

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  • Melvina Germain (1/18/2016 5:08:00 AM)

    I feel the love pouring through every line, it's so easy to tell that your Mom is your shining light. Abderrahmane you have certainly left a heartprint here and I love that. Thank you so much for sharing this delightful tribute to your Mom..... (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir (1/18/2016 9:44:00 AM)

    Thank you Melivina for your awesome comment.

  • Melvina Germain (1/18/2016 5:05:00 AM)

    I see the love pouring through the lines in this beautiful poem, I can tell your mother shines withinn your heart and soul. What a delight she must feel having you for a son. Awesome tribute to your Mom (Report) Reply

  • Abderrahmane Dakir (1/11/2016 6:22:00 AM)

    Thank you for reading si Driss. I cried by writing this poem because It's rarely to receive a call for one that tell you are you ok. Thanks for your awesome comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 11, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 12, 2016

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