Abderrahmane Dakir


Your Look - Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

Your appearance lets me affected,
Your look in all time not changed,
Your principle as I know remained.
Your great clothes fit you well I liked.
Your courtesy with everyone is respected.

My imagination drew your beauty without a flaw,
My thoughts obsessed with your eyes that glow.
My mind called your look as flower and dew.

Your skills are suitable for your good looking,
You are the one interferes with short wearing.

Choosing appropriate clothes with your size you are talented.
Speaking well, working well, presented well you are proved.

Your beauty is captivating, such the ideal bride and groom.
Meeting your beauty in looking and speaking is an art form,
Smart I should have been to be accepted in your classroom.

Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful, beauty, look, looking, love


Comments about Your Look by Abderrahmane Dakir

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/26/2016 10:10:00 PM)


    Full of feeling that expresses love in a unique way! (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (1/27/2016 3:53:00 AM)

    Thank you for reading and taking time to write this great comment.

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  • Ernest Makuakua (1/25/2016 9:18:00 AM)


    Your beauty is captivating, such the ideal bride and groom.
    Meeting your beauty in looking and speaking is an art form,
    Smart I should have been to be accepted in your classroom.

    beautiful piece keep writing im inspired
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    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (1/27/2016 3:51:00 AM)

    Thank you for your awesome opinion.

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/21/2016 10:56:00 AM)


    True love touches the heart so deep. Nice work. (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (1/21/2016 11:18:00 AM)

    Thank you for taking time to read it.

  • (1/19/2016 5:08:00 PM)


    Beautifully descriptive of the woman you love, she has many wonderful qualities which you have shown in the one you love and have married. Smart man to acknowledge your love for her so delicately and truthfully, she is a luck one to have invited you into her classroom. You have encompassed the surface beauty but also her inner beauty that will last forever. Thank you for sharing this delightful poem. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (1/20/2016 2:31:00 AM)

    Thank you for this great comment. I really enjoyed with it.

  • (1/19/2016 4:17:00 PM)


    Your description of the woman you love is touching.Thanks Si Abderrahmane for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (1/20/2016 2:29:00 AM)

    Than you Si Driss. Your comment is lovable.

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/18/2016 1:39:00 PM)


    Nice poem, the first door to heart is beauty...nicely written poem.10 (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (1/19/2016 10:30:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comment. I enjoyed with it.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 18, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 19, 2016


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