Your Look Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

Your Look

Rating: 5.0


Your appearance lets me affected,
Your look in all time not changed,
Your principle as I know remained.
Your great clothes fit you well I liked.
Your courtesy with everyone is respected.

My imagination drew your beauty without a flaw,
My thoughts obsessed with your eyes that glow.
My mind called your look as flower and dew.

Your skills are suitable for your good looking,
You are the one interferes with short wearing.

Choosing appropriate clothes with your size you are talented.
Speaking well, working well, presented well you are proved.

Your beauty is captivating, such the ideal bride and groom.
Meeting your beauty in looking and speaking is an art form,
Smart I should have been to be accepted in your classroom.

Your Look
Monday, January 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful,beauty,look,looking,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Full of feeling that expresses love in a unique way!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 27 January 2016

Thank you for reading and taking time to write this great comment.

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Ernest Makuakua 25 January 2016

Your beauty is captivating, such the ideal bride and groom. Meeting your beauty in looking and speaking is an art form, Smart I should have been to be accepted in your classroom. beautiful piece keep writing im inspired

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Abderrahmane Dakir 27 January 2016

Thank you for your awesome opinion.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 January 2016

True love touches the heart so deep. Nice work.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 21 January 2016

Thank you for taking time to read it.

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Roseann Shawiak 19 January 2016

Beautifully descriptive of the woman you love, she has many wonderful qualities which you have shown in the one you love and have married. Smart man to acknowledge your love for her so delicately and truthfully, she is a luck one to have invited you into her classroom. You have encompassed the surface beauty but also her inner beauty that will last forever. Thank you for sharing this delightful poem. RoseAnn

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Abderrahmane Dakir 20 January 2016

Thank you for this great comment. I really enjoyed with it.

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Driss Ezzireg 19 January 2016

Your description of the woman you love is touching.Thanks Si Abderrahmane for sharing.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 20 January 2016

Than you Si Driss. Your comment is lovable.

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