The Counter Of Time Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

The Counter Of Time

Rating: 5.0


You want to count my age,
You are not kind enough tell me what I rage,
My skin and my hair turn a new page,
You are strong enough to keep me in your cage.

What is it you search?
You seek to change my cast,
No one could play in the past,
Many years went so fast,
For me, they were high cost.

Whether, I live in joy or pain,
You will separate me from them.

I see that I will leave one day,
And return to my mother in clay,
And, you will stand to see how I die,
Before my soul will seep into sky,
And all my loved ones leave me, gone away,
Though I stayed all night to pray.

Friday, December 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: age,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 29 February 2016

A life's story well narrated till the end, wonderful poem yet again...My friend, I liked it.10+++

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Abderrahmane Dakir 29 February 2016

Thank you Mr.Asim Nehal for this comment.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 January 2016

A beautiful poem.................................

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Abderrahmane Dakir 23 January 2016

Thank you so much Mr. Jawad for reading.

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Heenal Vora 01 January 2016

Well written one poem ....????

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Abderrahmane Dakir 04 January 2016

Thank you. Your comment is so sweet.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 04 January 2016

I like your comment so much. Thank you.

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Driss Ezzireg 31 December 2015

Very nice poem, SI Abderrahmane.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 04 January 2016

Thank you for reading, Your comment means a lot for me.

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Gajanan Mishra 25 December 2015

I staed all night to pray, good one.

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