An Iron Willing Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

An Iron Willing

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Working on your building dream floor by floor,
By using merely steel with concrete,
To achieve the highest building in the world,

Getting around of crossing the finish line,
Ignore it and moving on improving your dream,
Further, beyond you were expected as before,
Our deep imagination conforms to human nature,
The art has no limit like the unconditional love.


If you think, you will accomplish your dream,
You will feel an earthquake that destroys,
Your building, willing and your life.
Then, you have to find out a new idea,
A rich source, as water in short supply,
To rebuild again your limitless building dream.

An Iron Willing
Wednesday, February 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,life,lifestyle,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 18 February 2016

It takes great imagination and fortitude to build your dream, it's attainable, you just have to surmount any and all difficulties along the way. Really good poem.10+++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Abderrahmane Dakir 18 February 2016

Thank you Roseann for taking time to read my poem.

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Clarence Prince 06 February 2016

Whatever it takes to build your dream, just keep on trying and never give up, there is hope!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 18 February 2016

Thank you Mr. Clarence for reading and taking time to write this comment.

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2016

Sky is the limit if one have Willpower to withstand every challenges in life, Nice poem,10

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Abderrahmane Dakir 18 February 2016

Thank you Mr Nehal for taking time to read my poem.

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Driss Ezzireg 04 February 2016

If you have the will, you have the means.Nice poem.Thank you for sharing.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 05 February 2016

Thank you Si Driss taking time to read my poem.

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