Being Natural Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

Being Natural

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You use the whiteners to light your skin,
I'm afraid you lead your body to pain.

You take medicine to lose your weight,
To be like that actress in your dream.

You tattoo your body like the wrong believer,
Totem could not protect you against danger,
Tattoos are no sign of beauty, faithful or power.

Artificial flowers don't allure my senses,
You water natural plant to ease your sight.

Bees seek in any flowers even its not beautiful
All matters are eating healthy natural nectar.

My God gives all things to natural beauty and more,
Please no change it anymore,
Natural beauty is too beautiful.

Being Natural
Thursday, January 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful,beauty,love,natural
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Driss Ezzireg 15 January 2016

Thought- provoking poem about how beautiful it is to stay natural.Thank you for sharing.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 16 January 2016

Thank you for your comment and took time for reading.

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Melvina Germain 18 January 2016

Your expression is definitely bouncing off the page in your admiration of natural beauty. Of course beauty is in the eye of the beholder so perhaps we ought to let beauty reighn for all. Thank you for sharing your poetic delight once again.....

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Abderrahmane Dakir 18 January 2016

Thank you taking time for reading.

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Roseann Shawiak 19 January 2016

Wonderful poem on natural beauty, it is magnificent, so glad to see a man appreciating it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Jasbir Chatterjee 04 November 2018

Indeed, natural beauty is always the best!

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Ramesh T A 01 October 2018

Natural beauty is real beauty! You are correct in your opinion about maintaining natural beauty!

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Muzahidul Reza 19 September 2018

Natural beauty is real beauty, great write, thanks for sharing

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Adrienne Crawford 09 September 2018

Wow what a very powerful poem, it's message is much needed. Keep up the good work.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 08 September 2018

Natural beauty is too beautiful....... Very true. All make-up things are needed only where the beauty is lacking. When the natural beauty is tere, that's the best. Thanks for the carefully crafted poem.

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