Abderrahmane Dakir


Being Natural - Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

You use the whiteners to light your skin,
I'm afraid you lead your body to pain.

You take medicine to lose your weight,
To be like that actress in your dream.

You tattoo your body like the wrong believer,
Totem could not protect you against danger,
Tattoos are no sign of beauty, faithful or power.

Artificial flowers don't allure my senses,
You water natural plant to ease your sight.

Bees seek in any flowers even its not beautiful
All matters are eating healthy natural nectar.

My God gives all things to natural beauty and more,
Please no change it anymore,
Natural beauty is too beautiful.

Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful, beauty, love, natural


Comments about Being Natural by Abderrahmane Dakir

  • Chinedu Dike (3/13/2017 11:31:00 AM)


    An insightful poem with good rendition of words. Thanks for sharing Dakir. (Report) Reply

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  • (2/8/2017 12:25:00 PM)


    wow natural beauty is beautiful. so much pleasure in reading this poem. i love it. stay blessed (Report) Reply

  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (4/18/2016 3:41:00 AM)


    Each and every human where created with natural beauty by god, it depends on how we feel the beauty, very nice poem.thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (2/25/2016 4:10:00 AM)


    Bees seek in any flowers even its not beautiful-very well written. (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (2/25/2016 4:44:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Akham for reading.

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (2/24/2016 12:45:00 PM)


    My God gives all things to natural beauty and more,
    Please no change it anymore,
    Natural beauty is too beautiful. beautiful my dear poet. please spread such ideas to the modern young ones. it is so true that they waste money for all kinds of cosmetics...... and wht not. thanky ou very much for this poem. tony
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    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (2/25/2016 3:20:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Tony for reading. I liked so much your comment.

  • Akhtar Jawad (2/23/2016 9:57:00 PM)


    My God gives all things to natural beauty and more,
    Please no change it anymore,
    Natural beauty is too beautiful.
    A wonderful poem I fully agree you.
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    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (2/24/2016 6:37:00 AM)

    Thank you Mr Jawad for reading.

  • (2/20/2016 2:33:00 PM)


    Strong poem concerning reality and the ability to love your true self. (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (2/20/2016 3:29:00 PM)

    Thank you for reading.I enjoyed with it.

  • (2/17/2016 11:35:00 AM)


    Powerful and deep sentiments....Indeed, there is no thing more more wonderful than natural beauty. This is a great poem. (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (2/18/2016 3:02:00 AM)

    Thank you for your powerful and deep comment.

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/26/2016 6:13:00 AM)


    With the eyes of peace and love. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (1/26/2016 8:01:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comment so great.

  • Ernest Makuakua (1/25/2016 9:16:00 AM)


    you see you made my day
    i always say why the make up why the fake hair why be the copy of someone else when you can be you?
    why be someone else than just being naturally you?

    powerful and beautiful
    i love the piece thank you for sharing

    My God gives all things to natural beauty and more,
    Please no change it anymore,
    Natural beauty is too beautiful
    (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (1/26/2016 8:01:00 AM)

    Thank you for your powerful comment.

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/21/2016 3:38:00 AM)


    Wonderfully highlighted that natural beauty is too good. Very amazing sharing done definitely. Interesting poem shared.10 (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (1/21/2016 3:52:00 AM)

    Thank you so much for your comment.

  • (1/19/2016 5:41:00 PM)


    Wonderful poem on natural beauty, it is magnificent, so glad to see a man appreciating it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (1/20/2016 2:33:00 AM)

    Thank you so much. Your comment encourage me to write more about beauty.

  • Melvina Germain (1/18/2016 5:11:00 AM)


    Your expression is definitely bouncing off the page in your admiration of natural beauty. Of course beauty is in the eye of the beholder so perhaps we ought to let beauty reighn for all. Thank you for sharing your poetic delight once again..... (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (1/18/2016 9:40:00 AM)

    Thank you taking time for reading.

  • (1/15/2016 11:16:00 AM)


    Thought- provoking poem about how beautiful it is to stay natural.Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Abderrahmane Dakir Abderrahmane Dakir (1/16/2016 2:56:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comment and took time for reading.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 14, 2016



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