As One Poem by Danny Draper

As One

Rating: 5.0


.
I

A m

O n e

E a c h

L e a r n

W i s d o m

T h r o u g h

K n o w l e d g e
All
Are
One
Inextricably interconnected indivisible by interdependence
Each as one, all as one, or all is none all is undone
That won as one can be done, one as one as one.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Deeks 13 March 2012

Hello Danny... Great layout to produce the perfect thought patter... This reminds me of beads on an abacus, each one useless and pointless on their own but gain relevance by the beads sat next too. Never actually mould but all sit well beside each other..But every bead counts :) .Bravo Mr Poet :)

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Sniffing Barry 05 March 2012

Hats off... superb written

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Adeline Foster 01 March 2012

Interesting this. Try mine - An Actuely Obtuse Pathagorean Lyric - Thanks for the comment. Adeline

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Soulful Heart 01 March 2012

Pyramid in words...............unique and one of the kind..

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Dave Walker 29 February 2012

I had to read this a few times, it played with my mind a bit. Love how it starts. A fantastic poem.

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Susan Lacovara 12 November 2013

Reminds me of a house of cards....stacking one after one, building a higher structure, stabilizing with the joined foundation, but if one, displaced, one, removed, the collapse inevitable...fantastic piece, my friend.

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Heather Wilkins 27 September 2013

i like the form very creative.

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R.benjamin Abate 21 August 2013

This one is unique. I like the structure. Well done.

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Valsa George 23 September 2012

'Inextricably inter connected, indivisible by inter dependence', yet am one! Unique with a disticnt corporal frame and a distinct individuality, yet how interconnected ! ! Wonderful write with an arresting structure!

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Wabi Sabi 20 September 2012

it is true, simple and wisdomous! thanks for share! !

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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