As Your Smile Blooms Out Poem by M D Dinesh Nair

As Your Smile Blooms Out

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As your smile blooms out
It spans over this season too
With all its fragrance.

I bury my past of pathos raving
In the depth of your eyes curious
And I begin to introcept.

As your smile blooms out
It changes my track of race
And its breeze leading all the way.

Perhaps I am to win the race
As the rivals have a season of dismay
And your petals fall not!

In the midst of your giggles
I hear a rain cloud hitting another
In its thunder the music of your glory is echoed.

And down to plains of lesser mortals
The thunder proclaims your name
And I write it on the sky for you

As your smile blooms out
I know, dear this season is mine too
As the race comes to an end.

But in the resurrecting woes of yester seasons
Can your smile ever keep me delighted
And will your lips offer a kiss sweet?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 15 November 2013

Unlike most of your other poems brooding over the disparities and wickedness of the world and the injustices of God and man, this poem is clearly romantic and has greater lyrical beauty and lovey dovey charm! !

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 December 2013

what a compromise with the lady of success! ! well done..Dinesh..

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Kanav Justa 02 December 2013

.. wonderful romantic poem.... the phrases used were great... read it 3 times to absorb everything

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Heather Wilkins 01 December 2013

and down to plains to lesser mortals the thunder proclaims your name and I write it on the sky for you beautifully written I love this phrase

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 November 2013

A beautiful romantic poem. Very well penned.

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Lyn Paul 15 November 2013

This will certainly put a smile on any romantic. Thank You

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