Ashes Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

Ashes

Rating: 4.6


I burned them all to ashes,
The things you used to say.
I guess you didn't write them down,
So you'd avoid this day.

I don't think you considered
The wonders of the mind,
And how it treats the remnants
Of lovers left behind.

You thought I'd always cherish,
The things you gave to me.
But honey, I can't value,
What others get for free.

It's going to take forever,
But I've got many years;
To burn away the memories
Contained in all my tears.

For now I've just avoided,
Substantial pain and strife.
I just incinerated all,
The things that were our life.

They now are only ashes.
No flames of love remain.
Here no Phoenix lies in wait;
For love, to rise again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 30 March 2009

Yes dear freind.......... there is no wait for any love, but what i am seeing that there is consideration about love beautifully written poem

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Pranav Kumar 20 March 2009

Beautiful poem you are a artist...........................write more: {

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Bob Taub 19 March 2009

A beautiful and sensitive write.Enjoyed it very much.

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Barry A. Lanier 22 February 2009

a wonderful catharsis penned for others to gain that wisdom and insight, , noting that while there is remorse there is no resentment, , , a man who yes has met himself before his arrival.....

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Ryan Thompson 17 February 2009

ryhming poems are the funniest but also the most touching in my opinion :) sweet job

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Don Mcwilliams 08 May 2018

And then we spend forever struggling to scrub the stain from out hands. This...really good.

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Chinedu Dike 19 April 2015

What a good and realistic way to forge ahead when the bliss of love has ended! Burning words of love to ashes and taking things in stride. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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A wonderful poem of emotion and putting those things behind... Moving ahead in confidence. Enjoyable read! ; D

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2010

VThey now are only ashes. No flames of love remain. Here no Phoenix lies in wait; For love, to rise again.....excellent and out standing.. clear expression of views in assertive way.. i am amazed at choosing of words.....10 read mine an end to solitude....clear emotions

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Cristy Upshaw 29 May 2009

such heartfelt words, with a touch of grace and elegance. nicely penned.

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