At 6: 30 Am, Starbucks Poem by Max Reif

At 6: 30 Am, Starbucks

Rating: 4.4


I frequent a well-lighted cafe'.
Outside, wraiths wander in the darkness,
a realm of hungry ghosts.
This morning even Death was there,
wrapped in a beggar's blanket,
turning to look at me.

This world is not separate from that one.
I came in from the dark,
but as I sit, and read and write,
the shadows seem to lighten,

and when I leave,
it shall be into Sunrise.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivy Christou 12 October 2005

ahh.. so you prefer to write in the morning, when it is nice and quiet.. Couldn't agree more! Nice write, maybe I should try Starbucs myself :) HBH

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Raynette Eitel 12 October 2005

What a contrast with the 'luxury' of Starbucks. Interesting. Raynette

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Agata Konopka 12 October 2005

sounds about right, that's what everyones morning at Starbucks' coffee the world over is like. Thanks, Agata

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Keiah Delu 12 October 2005

Hmmm...I could smell the fresh brew of coffee. This was nice.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 22 October 2005

dear max, good poem but i cannot make out this line: This world is not separate from that one. i mean why is it there?

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Linda Jenkinson 18 October 2005

excellent poem max...ghostly but inspiring and very easy to read...you use words very well.

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 15 October 2005

i loved this...i agree with the writer before me that there is a haunting feel to it which was wonderful...i've read some great ghost stories but only a handful of great ghostly poems...this was exceptionally well-written! ! !

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Amberlee Carter 12 October 2005

I used to write in the early mornings, from 4 to 6 am, but lately I've been writing in the afternoon. anyway, I loved the huanting feel of this piece...but then again, I enjoy all of your work...pen on!

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Michael Shepherd 12 October 2005

Why do I think of Virgil, wandering in the underworld? ! Haunting, anyway, Max! May rosy-fingered dawn guide your musings in the laptop of the gods!

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