indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
indira babbellapati
visakhapatnam, india
Thursday, November 5, 2009

At A Busy Junction

Rating: 3.5
the antics were meant to
draw the attention of busy
office-goers though involved risk
what with number of vehicles
stranded at the signals
the lean body, some seven years
in all dressed in dirty tatters
had an iron ring taking rounds
on the cheerful bones
he somersaulted in the narrow space
between two two-wheelers in
impatient urgency beside a car
the narrow space wasn't a
bother for the little boy
carefully watched over
by a pair of eyes from far

just when there's green
he bagan to run amuck
his hands stretched out
for alms...

indira babbellapati
Crenshaw happytime 02 December 2009
thank you for the glimpse of your country, to bring it to life in my home far away
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Sandhya S N 19 November 2009
very nice poem regards sandhya
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 November 2009
A good one...................
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Sandra Martyres 18 November 2009
A very vivid portrayal of this traffic junction problem
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Saadat Tahir 09 November 2009
prof! ! ! a superb snapshot.... and a keen eye like the two eyes watching over the theatrics abd antics of the little one... observant...heart felt anguish....well portrayed.. a peculiar phnomenon in our part of the world... gret, , ...ten and cheers
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rago rago 09 November 2009
at busy junction begging alms......well picturosied...........
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Patrick A. Martin 09 November 2009
Indera I love your poetry it instantly takes me back to the land where my heart was born. Thank you-----10
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 November 2009
A poet's eyes never miss a moment even at the busiest junction of time.
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Rachel Butler 06 November 2009
'He somersaulted in the narrow space' Rachel Ann Butler
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Ranjit Ravindran 05 November 2009
You made me feel as if I am watching this scene telecasted live on my monitor! Superb.
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