At Dawn Poem by Unica Hija

At Dawn

Rating: 5.0


The shimmering dawn
Fills my heart with glee and awe
As I watch birds fly.

Wednesday, January 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
while watching sea birds fly at early morn.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi A 29 January 2020

Fine ideas. Impressive presentation. Your pen pen can speak volumes in future. All the best.

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Unica Hija 29 January 2020

Thank you poet Ravi A for such an inspiring comment on this simple poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 January 2020

As I watch birds fly. before dawn read my poem moms smiles

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Unica Hija 29 January 2020

Thank you Poet poet for reading and commenting. Regards.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 January 2020

I see love of nature/birds, and hidden radiance, flair for words, all the best dear poet.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 April 2020

A well composed heavenly haiku......10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 April 2020

Romance of nature at dawn! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 February 2020

A shimmering dawn will always fill the heart with joy. When you watch the birds fly it is a feeling of hope together with the wonder of God's creation. A lovely little poem Dia.....10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 February 2020

I find great poetic beauty of this poem..... evident from the last line! Beautifully penned.......10++

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Anjandev Roy 11 February 2020

with glee and awe.....fine. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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