At Dusk I'Ll Rise Poem by khadija shaker
At Dusk I'Ll Rise
You are overwhelmed and frustrated within,
You always just seemed to be on my side
But inside of your heart lies,
The untold truth that is
Shinning on your eyes.
You always want to put me down
Trying hard to decrease my happiness
Gossiping about me is meaningless
But still at dusk I’ll rise
Those teardrops are heavy to fall
From my fragile eyes
This word is slowly killing me
Whispering around my self
But still like dust i’ll rise
Do you want to write me down in history with your lies?
Weak heart, knowing-less mind
You are trying to spill blood on my dreams
Unbelieving the words i say inside
But still like fog I’ll rise
Wanting me to feel that my life is almost over
There is no point of living
But still like dawn I’ll rise
I’ll fly
Far from those mind
Far to inhabitant word
With those broken wings
I’ll rise
I’ll rise
I’ll rise
I’ll continue flying
Till I reach the oasis
Where the luster sparked
My intense emotions building up
My feeling is sky hope to reach
As I walked out and in
I’ll forever rise
March 25
lovely poem ill fly and fly and fly the sky is the limit -10 anjali (do read mine MY SMALL LITTLE SECRET)
you write beautiful words...simply enchanting...your poem speeks and unspoken story.....nice work :) 10++
The sky shall, know the breadth of your wings, the people will be as ants to your feet, from you they will ask for life, you will give them depth of heart and mind...iip
An inspirational poem, written with conviction and insight to capture the essence of the piece. A well articulated piece with a powerful message - FAITH. FAITH KEEPS THOSE THAT KEEP THE FAITH - Mother Teresa. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
I Love this poem! ! ! ! Its so expressive such feeling and pictures Good Job^^
I’ll continue flying Till I reach the oasis Where the luster sparked My intense emotions building up My feeling is sky hope to reach As I walked out and in I’ll forever rise............... i will rise with the rising of yellow sun with al high hopes disregarding what otheres did to me.. this is philosophy of life....you got to go alone andnever beafraid of what is happening to yu.. it is good sign also....10 read mine ....you go alone........go back......sun
First, I welcome you here. I agree with Mubeen and I think this is one of your finest, so far. You have a nice poettess hiding in you and she will reveal more of her creativity and talent in times to come. Good work.
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 11:14:32 AM # 1.0.0
Its a nice work. If you put some hardwork you'll get a good grip. Basically a good poetic feeling.